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-<h5>Dissolve barriers of engagement</h5>
+<h5>Increase User Engagement</h5>
 
-Everyone knows asking a visitor to create an account often leads to less engagement.
+Everyone knows asking a visitor to create an account acts like a barrier to engagement.
 With Remarkbox, a visitor may interact with your content <b>without</b> an account.
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-<h5>Say <u>No</u> to Ads!</h5>
+<h5>Say <u>No</u> to tracking and Ads!</h5>
 
 Other comment systems, like Facebook and Disqus, track your (and your visitor's) activity to serve ads.
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       <b>or see <a href="#remarkbox-demo">it in action</a></b>
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