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@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
       <br />
       Get Remarkbox, the comment system
       <br />
-      that readers prefer to use!
+      that engaged readers prefer to use!
       <br />
       </span>
       <br />
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@
   <div class="row">
     <div class="one-half column">
 <center>
-<img src="/static/img/remarkbox-instant-preview-of-comments.gif" style="width: 70%;">
+<img src="/static/img/remarkbox-instant-preview-of-comments.gif">
 </center>
 <br/>
 <br/>
@@ -130,28 +130,39 @@ Readers don't register. They verify their email to log in.
 Comment previews are shown as the user types.
 </li>
 <li>
-Remarkbox feels like part of the site.
+Remarkbox feels like part of your website.
 </li>
 </ul>
 
 <br/>
 <br/>
 
-<h5>Promote only your message</h5>
+<h5>Say <u>no</u> to advertisements</h5>
 
-<p>
 <ul>
 <li>
+Promote only your message.
+</li>
+<li>
 Remarkbox will <u>not</u> display ads to <i>your</i> readers.
 </li>
-<li>
-Tell us your reason for migrating and get 1 month free.
-</li>
-<li>
-We will fight to help you win.
-</li>
 </ul>
-</p>
+
+<br/>
+<br/>
+
+<h5>Try it now, risk free!</h5>
+
+<ul>
+<li>
+Put Remarkbox on your site today in 30s or less!
+</li>
+<li>
+Pay nothing until your 10th comment, $5/mo after that.
+</li>
+<li>
+Cancel anytime, we even export comments.
+</li>
 
     </div>
   </div>
@@ -179,25 +190,18 @@ We will fight to help you win.
 <b><a href="http://russell.ballestrini.net/about">Russell Ballestrini</a></b> - <i>Founder</i>
 
 <p>
-  My vision of Remarkbox started back in 2013 as I prepared to port
-  my blog from Wordpress to Pelican, a static-site-generator.
+  My vision of Remarkbox started back in 2013 while porting
+  my blog from Wordpress to Pelican, a static-site-generator.<br/>
   I had a problem. What would I do with my readers comments?
 </p>
 
 <p>
-  All of my research found solutions which served ads - I didn't want that.
-  In the end, I decided to build an embedable comment system.
-  After a few prototypes, I had a eureka moment. 
-  I would merge the idea of an embedable comment system with a Q&A site.
+  My research found solutions which served ads and I didn't want that.<br>
+  So I decided to build my own, because "how long could it possibly take to build an embedable comment system?" (hint: 3 years)
 </p>
 
 <p>
-  The result is Remarkbox, a single web application which may serve either use case.
-</p>
-
-<p>
-  My confidence to scale Remarkbox <!--, product, and open source project -->
-  stems from my success operating <a href="https://linkpeek.com" target="_blank">LinkPeek, your webpage screenshot service</a>.
+  I put a lot of love and thought into Remarkbox. I hope you and your readers enjoy using it.
 </p>
 
   </div>