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@@ -63,10 +63,10 @@
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     <center>
-	    <!-- <h2 style="margin-top: 0px">Readers want <span class="avoidwrap">to communicate</span> <span class="avoidwrap">with you.</span></h2> -->
-      <h2 style="margin-top: 0px">Communicate with <span class="avoidwrap">your readers</span></h2>
+      <!-- <h2 style="margin-top: 0px">Readers want <span class="avoidwrap">to communicate</span> <span class="avoidwrap">with you.</span></h2> -->
+      <h2 style="margin-top: 0px">Communicate <span class="avoidwrap">with your readers</span></h2>
       <p style="font-size: 1.25em;">
-      <span class="avoidwrap">Hosted comments</span> <span class="avoidwrap">without ads or tracking</span>
+      <span class="avoidwrap">Hosted comments without</span> <span class="avoidwrap">ads or tracking</span>
       <span class="avoidwrap"><a href="/finally-a-disqus-alternative.html">... read more</a></span>
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@@ -81,22 +81,26 @@
       <center>
       <span style="font-size: 1.25em;">
 
-	<span class="avoidwrap">Be remarkable.</span> <span class="avoidwrap">Share the gift of <b>voice</b>.</span>
+	<span class="avoidwrap">Remarkbox is a hosted <b>comment system</b></span> 
+	<span class="avoidwrap">built to <b>engage</b> readers</span> <span class="avoidwrap">with your content.</span>
         <br />
         <br />
 
-	<span class="avoidwrap">A comment is worth</span> <span class="avoidwrap">a thousand <b>keywords</b>.</span>
-        <br />
-
-	<span class="avoidwrap">Capture the <b>long tail</b> </span> <span class="avoidwrap">with user generated content.</span>
+	<span class="avoidwrap">Readers feel great when they contribute</span> 
+	<span class="avoidwrap">which is a win-win, because ...</span>
         <br />
         <br />
 
-	<span class="avoidwrap">Remarkbox <b>engages readers</b></span> <span class="avoidwrap">with your site</span>
-	<span class="avoidwrap">and works everywhere,</span> <span class="avoidwrap">even <b>static sites</b>.</span>
+	<span class="avoidwrap">A comment is worth</span>
+	<span class="avoidwrap">a thousand <b>keywords</b>.</span>
         <br />
         <br />
+
+	<span class="avoidwrap">Capture the <b>long tail</b></span>
+	<span class="avoidwrap">with user generated content!</span>
         <br />
+        <br />
+
       <span class="avoidwrap">To see <a href="#remarkbox-demo">Remarkbox in action</a></span> scroll <span class="avoidwrap">down to the bottom of this page.</span>
       <br />
       <br />
@@ -104,6 +108,8 @@
       <a class="button red" href="https://my.remarkbox.com/setup">Setup Remarkbox</a>
       <br />
       or <a href="#learn">learn more</a>
+
+      <!--
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@@ -111,6 +117,8 @@
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+      -->
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