From 521c6a79a5896b57bea1a106c0cfc7ae12184bac Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: russellballestrini <russell.ballestrini@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 22 Nov 2017 17:39:19 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] 	modified:   index.html

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@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@
     <center>
       <h3 style="margin-top: 80px"><span class="avoidwrap">"Does my comment system</span> <span class="avoidwrap">serve my readers ads?"<span></h3>
     </center>
-      Ad networks on free comment systems do more then hurt your brand, they also track, spy, and slow down your pages.
+      Ad networks on free comment systems do more than hurt your brand, they also track, spy, and slow down your pages.
       <br>
       If you want to take back control of your site and end this lopsided arrangement try Remarkbox, the hosted comment system that <span class="avoidwrap"><b>works for site owners</b></span>, not against them
       <span class="avoidwrap"><a href="/finally-a-disqus-alternative.html">... read more</a></span>
@@ -181,24 +181,33 @@ But your comment system is slowing you down.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-You know your page is only as fast as your slowest resource. You know search engines use page load speeds in their search ranking.
+<b>You already know that &mdash;</b>
 </p>
 
-<p>You know that the free comment systems have a business model that prioritizes ad revenue over page speed.</p>
+<ul>
+<li>
+your page is only as fast as your slowest resource
+</li>
+
+<li>
+search engines rank using page load speeds
+</li>
+
+<li>
+free comment systems have a business model that prioritizes ad revenue (and hijacking your traffic and readers) over page speed
+</li>
+
+</ul>
 
 <p>
-Our priority is simple, to <b>help you rank in search</b> &mdash;
+<b>But did you know that Remarkbox's priority is to help you rank higher in search?</b>
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Remarkbox helps you capture search traffic from long tail keywords in your user generated comments while keeping your page load speeds as fast as possible.
+Yes, our goal is to help you capture <a href="https://faq.remarkbox.com/d1f50998-bb29-11e7-951f-040140774501/do-remarkbox-comments-help-with-seo-and-search" target="_blank">search traffic from the long tail keywords in your user generated comments</a> while we keep your page load speeds as fast as possible.
 </p>
 
-<p>Optimizing for speed means we often take a minimalist approach. We keep Remarkbox lean and feeling like part of your site, not something bolted on.</p>
-
-
-<br>
-<br>
+<p>We optimize for speed and take a minimalist approach by default so that your comments stay lean and feel like part of your site, not something bolted on.</p>
 
 
     </div>
@@ -207,6 +216,7 @@ Remarkbox helps you capture search traffic from long tail keywords in your user
       <center>
       <br>
       <br>
+      <br>
       <a class="button red" href="https://my.remarkbox.com/u/namespaces">Join Remarkbox</a>
       <br />
       <b>or see <a href="#remarkbox-demo">it in action</a></b>