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-      <h3><span class="avoidwrap">No Ads. No Tracking.</span> <span class="avoidwrap"> Just Hosted Comments.</span></h3>
-    </center>
-      Ad networks on free comment systems do more than hurt your brand, they also track, spy, and slow down your pages.
-      <br>
-      If you want to take back control of your site and end this lopsided arrangement try Remarkbox, the hosted comment system that <span class="avoidwrap"><b>works for site owners</b></span>, not against them
+      <h2 style="margin-top: 0px">Your readers want <span class="avoidwrap">to communicate</span> <span class="avoidwrap">with you.</span></h2>
+      <p style="font-size: 1.25em;">
+      <span class="avoidwrap">We host your comments</span> <span class="avoidwrap">without ads or tracking</span>
       <span class="avoidwrap"><a href="/finally-a-disqus-alternative.html">... read more</a></span>
+      </p>
+    </center>
 
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-        <span class="avoidwrap">Remarkbox offers a</span> <span class="avoidwrap"><b>hosted comment system</b></span>
-        <span class="avoidwrap">to help engage readers</span> <span class="avoidwrap">with your content.</span>
-        <span class="avoidwrap">It works everywhere,</span> <span class="avoidwrap">even <b>static sites</b>.</span>
+        <span class="avoidwrap">Remarkbox <b>engages readers</b></span> <span class="avoidwrap">with your content</span>
+        <span class="avoidwrap">and works everywhere,</span> <span class="avoidwrap">even <b>static sites</b>.</span>
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-      <h2 style="margin-top: 60px">Your readers want <span class="avoidwrap">to communicate</span> <span class="avoidwrap">with you</span></h2>
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