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 <p>
   My vision of Remarkbox started back in 2013 while porting
   my blog from Wordpress to Pelican, a static-site-generator.<br/>
-  I had a problem. What would I do with my readers comments?
+  I had a problem: what would I do with my readers comments?
 </p>
 
 <p>
-  My research found solutions which served ads and I didn't want that.<br>
-  So I decided to build my own, because "how long could it possibly take to build an embedable comment system?" (hint: 3 years)
+  My research found solutions which served ads and I didn't want that.
+  So I built my own solution because -<br/>"how long could it possibly take to build an embeddable comment system?" (hint: 3 years)
 </p>
 
 <p>
-  I put a lot of love and thought into Remarkbox. I hope you and your readers enjoy using it.
+  Lots of love and thought have gone into making Remarkbox. I hope you and your readers enjoy using it!
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